- CONTENT: Generally appropriate methods with some evidence presented, some understanding of learning process.Perhaps you could have added more evidences (results of the questionnaire, more examples of what you did at work…)
- LANGUAGE : Big improvement but there are still some agreement problems, careful with the use of colloquial expressions.Most part of work shows appropriate register and style. Some complex sentence structures, not always used successfully. Expression largely clear but some lapses
- PRESENTATION : Presentation satisfactory, with limited but effective structure and style of presentation. Some extra material and illustrations included.
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